Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 22, 2020
Lock down sheet
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Eddie, Harvey here I like your photo of the corona virus, to improve your work you could put a comma in front of "Hi" and you put a one of these , in sted of one of these ' in the word wasn't. Thanks for my feedback on my blog.
ReplyDeleteHi Eddie,I think that I agree with you that level 4 was very limited, I think the only fun thing in level 4 is baking and cooking dishes, what do you think the only pros about level 4 lockdown? Next time you could list out all the pros and cons that you can think of. I also thank you for commenting on my blog! :)
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