Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, May 7, 2020
Snakes
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Great work Eddie, your voice is nice and clear which makes it easy to listen to. Your opening is so captivating as you have put a lot of effort into the narrating and creating suspense. For your first documentary, you have done a wonderful job!
ReplyDeleteWow Eddie what an incredible job you have done with your first documentary! You had a really clear voice and made this exciting to listen to, ka pai!
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